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Post by KitoriKisirogi Wed Sep 09, 2015 11:21 pm

Name:20 Sword Style Beast,Zaeran(Pronounced Zaren)
Element:Spirit
Effects:Summons a 20 Swod style user beast

Description:This Technique is only to be use in Kitori's Bankai.The beast is a image of the first 20th Sword style Bankai user.It Uses large amount of Spirit Energy and can also do lightspeed(only in one move) sword attacks,aswell as gather Spirit Energy from nearby Objects,people.The Origin of this beast is from along time ago in the Soul Society when a Shinigami had a Powerful 20th sword style Bankai.Unfortunatly he was defeated,but his power went into his sword,which was granted apon his family,the Kisirogis.This beast can launch Kido attack as well as attack using his swords.This makes the User known as a 40 sword style user instead of 20 Swords,because it i considered a sword multiplying technique.Its Best attack its 40 sword style Festival,in which the user and the beast use their swords in a light speed attack.The 40 sword Style festival can only be used once every 5 hours and will make the Beast disappear for 3,if the beast is used before the 3 hours are up then the user will die.If User survives he/she will not be able to use this technique unless they perform Seppukku which puts the beast power into them(Changing their bankai to 40 sword style and changing Shikai to 20 Sword Style)

Beast Identification:the beast is 30'5 feet tall and wide,wearing a cloak to hide his body,and a mask for his face.

(edited for g mod)


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Post by straywolf174 Thu Sep 10, 2015 2:40 am

Hmmm. Hate to be "that guy" but this seems to be pushing the limits of G-Modding to me. I'd rather have Setoku accept\deny this, asi would not have the expeirience to say.
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Post by Setoku Thu Sep 10, 2015 6:08 am

It's overly Modded, but it seems more ripped from a dice rolling style rp, like dungeon and dragons, so.... Gotta refuse it. Multi-paragraph rp relays more on sense then simple roll of dye. Sorry, but not approved.
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Post by KitoriKisirogi Fri Sep 11, 2015 12:12 am

Worth a try though wasnt it? Ill edit it and make it less G mod if you like,ill put some limits and remove some stuff too
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Post by straywolf174 Sun Sep 13, 2015 3:21 am

As Setoku said, Roleplay is common sense and skill with strategy, not to mention word play. Try to interpret that and you should be fine.
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