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Post by Haruchi Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:51 pm

Due to several user requests, it is now possible for you to suggest zanpakutous and ressureccions. As you most likely know already, there are five ranks: Lesser (D), Common (C), Greater (B), Elite (A) and Legendary (S).
This thread will focus on D and C ranks to even out the numbers. Do not post move descriptions. Only the zan/ress information - moves will be requested later on if yours is accepted.

Each zanpakutou you are suggesting will need a general description and at least one move description.


  • D ranks have one move. -> One move description.



  • C ranks have two moves. -> Two move descriptions.

About MOVE descriptions: Descriptions use two tags; [player], which is the user's name and [gender], which is his/her (depending on the user's gender). It is now possible to use apostrophes ( ' ) too in the descriptions.

Here's an example:
"[player] raises [gender] hand and calls forth a surge of horrifying black energy."

-> "Chiharu raises her hand and calls forth a surge of horrifying black energy."

Here's the format players submitting suggestions are to follow:

Spoiler:

If accepted, I will PM you the move format to fill out. You can post the suggestions here; easier for me to go through them as they are added.


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Post by Ezoroth Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:39 pm

1st Zan

Zanpakutou Name: Shi no burēdo.
Description: The weapon is a massive Scythe which is about the same hieght as the wielder. Four blades, two on top and two on bottom. The staff splits in half at each end to seperate the blades, leaving just enough room for the hand to hold the weapon. the blades length being half the hieght of the Scythe. The blades are a black metal with a fang shape, spikes of wood from the staff itself are about half an inch above the blades so it can also stab into the opponent it just cut. The wood seems to be soaked in blood and twisted, creating a spiral design but still being straight.
Theme: Death
Type: Melee
Desired effects: Movement Boost, Melee Boost

2nd Zan

Zanpakutou Name: Akarui ha.
Description: The weapon takes form of a silver bladed, blue handled Spartan sword that looks like it's been cut straight down the middle and then stuck to another of the same sword half, giving it a symetrical design unlike a normal Spartan Sword. The blade glows the cleaner it is, and during the fight the glow somewhat distracts the opponent in a close range fight.
Theme: Light
Type: Spirit
Desired effects: Melee Resistance, Spirit Boost

3rd Zan

Zanpakutou Name: Seishin-tekina senshi.
Description: Two Broadswords, one blue and one red. The hilts on each are a solid black, and the blades are both really light-weight even though each sword is the size of the wielder. The red one seems more of an attack weapon, since the blade on it is bigger than that of the blue one. Since the size of these weapon are so big, only one can be in use at a time, each sword having a different effect.
Theme: Sword
Type: Balanced
Desired effects: Melee Boost, Spirit Boost


1st Ress

Ressureccion name: Aves la Terror
Description: The Hollow suddenly grows a mass ammount of bone feather, which weigh about seventy pounds each, and grows massive wings that span at about fifteen feet in both directions. The feathers also contain a large amount of reiatsu.
Theme: Bird
Type: Melee
Desired effects: Melee Boost, Melee Resist

2nd Ress

Ressureccion name: Ladrón de la Vida.
Description: The Hollow suddenly becomes a long worm, yet keeping the arms and torso, with the mask turning into massive and very sharp, pointy teeth. These teeth catch the target and sap reiatsu from the enemy. The Hollow also has a sharp and long tail.
Theme: Leech
Type: Spirit
Desired effects: Spirit Boost, Heal

3rd Ress

Ressureccion name: Insectos tiempo
Description: The Hollow has six long legs, and the arms are replaced by two bug like wings. The head has a stinger like horn right above the eyes and the mask suddenly creates a helmet like structure around the head. The mouth of the mask has many little teeth that can be used for biting.
Theme: Insect
Type: Balanced
Desired effects: Area Resist, Movement Boost

There, first set :3

Chi-edit:Accepted so far, will do little tweaks to descriptions. I'll PM you the move format after the resses.
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Post by Haruchi Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:32 pm

Seem fine, accepted. I'll PM the move format.
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Post by Phantom Fri Apr 06, 2012 12:23 pm

Ressureccion name: La Cadena Celestiales
Description: Upon releasing this ressureccion, the user feels like Heaven gave power to him, The user's right arm is tied with white chains and the user weapon changes into a big, white scythe. The big white scythe and the user's hand is connected.
Theme: Light
Type (spirit, melee, or balanced): balanced
Desired effects (you can find the effects from zan and ress lists): Spirit boost, Melee boost.

*Note : Please change the description if my grammar is not right, thanks.
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Post by Arctic Sun Apr 08, 2012 5:57 pm

Ress List
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Zan List
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Post by Lanaught Sun Apr 08, 2012 6:19 pm

Zanpakutou Name: Golem del Volcan, Iliados
Description: Bound into earth and magma, this golem gained destructive power from the infernal depths.
Theme: Magma Bound Golem
Type: Balanced
Desired Effects: Spirit Boost, Melee Boost.

Zanpakutou Name: Golem del Bosque, Elgest
Description: Bound into earth and wood, this golem gained wisdom and power from the forests.
Theme: Wood Bound Golem
Type: Spirit
Desired Effects: Spirit Boost, Spirit Resistance.

Zanpakutou Name: Golem del Abismo, Yeril
Description: Bound into earth and precious stones, this golem gained strength and endurance from the deep earth.
Theme: Crystal Bound Golem
Type: Melee
Desired Effects: Melee Boost, Melee Resistance.

Zanpakutou Name: Golem del Desierto, Azen
Description: Bound into earth and metal, this golem gained unmatched defenses from the forests.
Theme: Metal Bound Golem
Type: Balanced
Desired Effects: Spirit Resistance, Melee Resistance.
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Post by Haruchi Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:27 pm

Phantom: I'll tweak the description. Otherwise it's fine.

Arc: Quite many you've got there... Celestial Sword and Dragon's Tooth need a concept revamp, there are ones quite similar to them. IOthers are great. I'll change Elven Bow's name to make it less...elf-like.

Lana: Those would be better-suited for ressureccions. If you can think of similar concept for zanpakutous as well, I may add these. I don't personally mind there being resses & zans which have a common theme.
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Post by Lanaught Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:30 pm

I was thinking along the lines of unohana's and mayuri's zan where their zan transform. wasn't thinking on transforming the person itself o.o
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Post by Haruchi Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:33 pm

It's sort of easier to keep ressureccions as beings and zanpakutous as objects. o/
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Post by Lanaught Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:35 pm

Meh o.o Use them as you wish~
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Post by Arctic Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:40 pm

Dragons Tooth
Theme: Broadsword
Type: Melee
Description: This large sword takes a huge amount of strength to lift, let alone use. It has the ability to cause extreme friction while slicing through the air, causing burns on any foes cut
melee boost

Celestial Whip
Theme: Whip
Type: Melee
Description: This whip has an extremely long range on account of the flexibility it has. It is as hard as steel and has ridges along its length, causing painful cuts if hit
range boost, berserk
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Post by Haruchi Sun Apr 08, 2012 7:42 pm

Right, now they're fine. o/

I'll PM you the move forms, and I'd prefer it if you PM'ed them here on the forums due to in-game's limited amount of characters in one PM.
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Post by Phantom Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:22 am

Ressureccion name: Maruchi iryujon ( Multi Illusion )
Description: Upon releasing the ressureccion , the user's weapon changes into a pair of claw. The pair of claw seems like there are high amount of Spirit Energy in it.
Theme: Illusion
Type (spirit, melee, or balanced): Spirit
Desired effects (you can find the effects from zan and ress lists): Movement Bonus, Heal

**Description Editable ;D
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Post by Haruchi Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:26 pm

I might add a requirement for these. Good knowledge of English, and imagination & creativity.
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Post by Ezoroth Mon Apr 09, 2012 2:51 pm

Set 2

1st Ress

Ressureccion name: Voluntad de del Diablo.
Description: Suddenly a outbreak of bat like wings erupts from the hollows back, long claws and teeth forming. Spikes form down the back of the hollow and along the arms, a red glow to them. A horn forms right above the eyes.
Theme: Demon
Type: Spirit
Desired effects: Movement Boost, Heal

2nd Ress

Ressureccion name: Fortaleza del Diablo.
Description: Horns grow suddenly from the Hollows head, and the hollow grows to twice the original size. Long and sharp three fingered claws grow in place of the hands and feet. The teeth of the Hollow become extremely sharp.
Theme: Demon
Type: Melee
Desired effects: Melee Boost, Spirit Resist

3rd Ress

Ressureccion name: Los esbirros del Diablo.
Description: The hollow suddenly becomes in a wolf form, but with massive claws and teeth, spikes going down the spine. To horns are in place of the ears, why are slightly shaped like a pointy ear. The spikes were in three rows down the back.
Theme: Wolf/Demon
Type: Balanced
Desired effects: Movement Boost, Range Boost

1st Zan

Zanpakutou name: Seimei no sutaffu.
Description: A simple staff with a green blade at each end. The blade curves itself just barely. The wood of the staff was a like brown. A green glow of light followed the movements of the blades.
Theme: Life
Type: Spirit
Desired effects: Spirit Boost, Heal

2nd Zan

Zanpakutou name: Seimei no ken.
Description: A green bladed sword with a brown hilt, this sword has a gaurd shaped like a leaf. The hilt seems to be made of a light brown wood, and the blade is thin and green, as if to resemble grass. A green glow of light followed the movements of the blade.
Theme: Life
Type: Melee
Desired effects: Berserk, Heal

3rd Zan

Zanpakutou name: Seimei no yumi.
Description: A bow with a green string, the arrows had green arrow heads. The wood of the bow and arrows were a light brown, the string on the bow green and looked as though it were made of grass, but was very durable. A green glow of light follow the movements of the arrowhead.
Theme: Life
Type: Balanced
Desired effects: Range Boost, Heal

Second Set


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Post by Haruchi Mon Apr 09, 2012 5:11 pm

Note: Translations would be pretty hardcore.

Ress/Zan description: 350 characters as maximum. The longer, the better.

Move decriptions: 150 characters as maximum. Same as above. Don't leave them to three words! "Chiharu slashes opponent." Is a no-no.

Ezo: Velocidad del Lobo, Rugido del Dragón and Pájaro de fuego need revamps. Wolf, Dragon, and Phoenix; rather sure all three are listed in public list as well. Zans are fine.


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Post by neji2k Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:18 pm

Zanpakutou: Jupiters Ring
Description:This shinigami has sealed his spiritual pressure into a ring with a red gem on it. When he releases the power of the ring a powerful gas surrounds the area letting the shinigami have full control over the air...even the air that you breath.
Theme: Ring
Type: spirit
Effects : dual resist 8% and area resist 8%

Ressurecion: Hades Bow
Description: This hollows arm transforms into a complete entity of dark spiritual energy.Focusing his spiritual pressure he molds the energy into a bow and is able to absorb spiritual pressure constantly from his arm and create quick beams of his pressure that can be fired at ridiculously high speeds.
Theme: dark bow
type:spirit
Effects: range boost, spirit resist 7%

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Post by Haruchi Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:21 pm

Accepted, I'll PM you the move format.
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Post by Lanaught Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:21 pm


Ressureccion Name: Chained Leviathan
Description: An incarnation of the seas. This titan of the ocean has such a vast destructive power that the gods saw fit to restrain it. However, even chained it's size and power have not diminished in mortal eyes.
Theme: Mythic Serpent
Type: Spirit
Desired effects: Spirit Boost, Dual Resist
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Post by UtahimeShi Sat Nov 23, 2013 2:28 pm

Before I explain the zanpakuto, I must inform you, these designs are the intellectual property of J Potter {Myself} and are therefore under © protection laws. These designs are for strict use by WoB {If accepted} and myself.

Zanpakuto Designs D Rank
Sword Name: Desert Rains {Sabaku Reinzu}
Sword Theme: Water
Sword Rank: D
Sword Description: The release of this weapon causes the blade to become a thunder cloud that rains on her wielder
Release Phrase: "Cool the scorched earth." {Shōdo o reikyaku suru}
Boost: Heal
Ability One
Name: Thunderclap {Raimei}
Description: A bolt of lightning forks out from the raining cloud to strike at the enemy
Damage Type: Spirit
Move Type: Stationary
Effect: None
Range: 5.1

As each design is accepted or rejected, I will add my next design in this same thread to prevent flooding the forum

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Post by Haruchi Sun Feb 02, 2014 7:37 pm

Reopened. Accepting submissions for all sword ranks.
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Post by Ulquiorra4 Sat Feb 08, 2014 3:43 am

Ressureccion Name: Antigua Estrella de Mar

Description: This fairly passive hollow left alone for one simple reason it can't die.  The hollows soft skin turns greyish blending in with whatever it is against. While easy to cut it is pointless to do so as it will just come right back.  

Theme: Starfish

Rank: Lesser

Type: Balanced Defense

Desired effects: Heal at 3.6%
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Post by Ulquiorra4 Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:13 pm

Ressureccion Name: Terror espectral (spectral terror)

Description: The shadow cat, as fast as it is it is deadlier still. Moving silent as the night is kills its' target without ever being noticed. From head to tail it is coated in dark fur blending in with the night.

Theme: Panther

Rank: Common

Type: agg melee

Desired effects: Melee Boost, Move Boost

above ress english name:
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Post by Ulquiorra4 Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:22 pm

Ressureccion: Gran hidra (Great Hydra)

Description: From the depths of nothingness it came to be out of the water where it dwells. it's massive size making that the perfect pace to dwell. But nothing stops it when it is hungry not even the earth.

Theme: Hydra

Rank: Elite

Type: balanced balanced

Desired effects: Heal, Spirit Boost, Melee Boost
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Post by Ulquiorra4 Mon Feb 17, 2014 7:27 pm

Ressureccion: Caminando muerte (Walking death)

Description: For all intensive purposes a decaying corpse that doesn't know how to die. Legend says that at one point in time it was alive. Death has only made it that much stronger though.

Theme: Zombie

Rank: Greater

Type: Agg melee

Desired Effects: Melee Boost, Berserk
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